Friday, September 16, 2011

Tender Buttons: full mock up #1

"gut check time." —kidwell
Well we checked my gut. I think its going to be okay but I definitely need to take some time and step back and realize what I am truly trying to say with Gertrude Steins work. I think on some level I know but when explaining it comes out as mush. There are perhaps too many concepts being shown formally all at once. Although they all work with her text, they may not meld together well enough to solidify the concept. Counter-production? maybe . . . who knows. At an atomic level this is supposed to be about clarity and non clarity. How do I reformat this to make sense, drop the excess, and move forward with a solid idea executing it formally in a solid, communicative way? this is what i am asking myself these next few hours

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