1 Great collection of images. The following artifacts could use one or two more angles/variety presented: sword swallower, fortune teller, bearded lady.
2 It's really important that you construct a cohesive and holistic concept from page to page and front to back. Address the following:
Images of the snake lady, pickled punk, and sword swallower are inconsistent with the time period of the others. You can solve this by either finding more vintage photos or digitally-aging them yourself in order to best match the aesthetic qualities of the rest of the book.
I really like where you are going with the cover! When you translate this to digital really work with it so that it too matches the vintage & dark quality of the rest of your book.
3 These photos are not the best quality for online critic or process documentation, but I'm assuming that's because you didn't have a scanner on hand on snowday.
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It's really important that you construct a cohesive and holistic concept from page to page and front to back. Address the following:
Images of the snake lady, pickled punk, and sword swallower are inconsistent with the time period of the others. You can solve this by either finding more vintage photos or digitally-aging them yourself in order to best match the aesthetic qualities of the rest of the book.
I really like where you are going with the cover! When you translate this to digital really work with it so that it too matches the vintage & dark quality of the rest of your book.
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These photos are not the best quality for online critic or process documentation, but I'm assuming that's because you didn't have a scanner on hand on snowday.