Word speak. How does one communicate swarm without it looking like bees? I figured these "bees" needed something to swarm around. Why not make them swarm around swarm. I was fairly confident in my composition but after critique I feel like this is on the way to being great just not quite there right now. Pushing the idea of swarming by adding more letters would enhance the piece. Also there is a little too much structure. So basically I should add some letters, make the swarm more organic and bam, I'd have a striking piece. I definitely need to start taking more risks. My affinity for symmetry and balance is kicking me in the ass right now.