Sunday, September 11, 2011

experiment 2: tender buttons


There are a few parts that are way longer than i expected. the first part "dirt" last about twice as long as id like it too. And the end needs finessing. I am posting this hoping to get feed back not only formally and conceptually but to also know if i am backing off the line of imagery. Last class I pushed the boundaries of imagery, and hopefully this time, the images function more as background and supporting information rather than overpowering the text.

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